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[PLUMBER'S CREED]

Dear Ferrantelli and NielsTiercelin

Wow well you got cool names. Are you brothers or something? Anyways this game is really entertaining. I like the cross between the assassins creed and the mario franchise. They seem to fit well together here. It was short but fun nonetheless. Well done especially when it was finished in only 3 days. The only thing the bothered me though was the slippery movements I'm getting. Also its hard to know which is a platform and which is not. The designs of the walls are a bit too intricate and gaudy to be able to recognize as a platform. At first I tried to jump on it but realized it was just a piece of wallpaper background. Or I realized its just a window. But anyways kudos to this game. I believe this hasn't been done before. I would suggest though...medals. An example of one achievement is where you have to avoid every enemy. And be able to hit all the abstergo symbols without being spotted. But anyways its good. Keep up the great work.

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber (Probably made a video about this)
Etriuswimbleton

[Jedi's Sword]

dear kotfind

Well you made a game. But its basically just a barebones minimum of what you can expect from a full game. Also if you would have enough time to invest. Why not translate most of the interfaces. As most of the people playing that you should consider are mostly oriented with English. There's music yes but no sfx. Sfx would really make it more appealing but still this game is a bare minimum of a full game like I said before. Try to delve on this a little bit before you upload it here. But if you're fishing for feedback I don't believe you should start here. I would suggest you post it on your FB, or your friends or get some professional help. The idea is too simple, try to make it stand out more. And I almost forgot. I apologize for the low score. Its because this game is a bit unpolished/unfinished. Delve on this a little bit more and add more features and come back here if you're ready. Kudos to a working game...Its just not interesting enough sorry.

PS:This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

kotfind responds:

Sorry. I only study to do games.

[ORB's FAILURE]

dear SKOLKO

Nice work using the unity game engine. The 3D style is appealing, The functions of the game are working fine especially the menu screen. Things that bother me though is the way the ball smashes just because it hits the edge of a platform. This is even worse when I come across a very small platform and I have to really time it right to avoid that. Speaking of time. This game is a great time killer. I also like the parts where the other platforms moving at the foreground becomes an obstacle for the ball. Speaking of obstacle I was thinking of a suggestion to add more varieties of obstacles for the ball/player to face. Examples: Spikes,Slides,pits,more cubes etc...You get the idea. This is interesting especially when is randomly generated too. Keep it up!

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[SuperSonicSpaceDash]

Dear ValiantGamesIndie

Well the game uses the same formula based on your previous games...But first and foremost I have to apologize for the low score but anyways lets get down to business. I'll organize this into a list so that you won't have to. I'll make some quick suggestions here and there then share points on what bothers me with the game then thats it.

-Well your choice of music is well...Unfitting. If this is sonic I was expecting something...well...Sonic.
-I would suggest mapping the keys to the WASD too for convenience
-Yeah I noticed the bullet glitch and its the first glitch I come across. I could say for most of the people who'll play this. The first thing that they'll see in game is the bullet glitch. So please fix ASAP.
-No SFX? It would really play better with SFX if you'd ask me.
-The obstacles and the backgrounds look almost the same. Its quite confusing to see which is bad and should avoid and which is not.
- There are many uneeded details in the background too like the luminescent blue orbs, the squiggly lines, the shrooms etc.
-I would suggest the game should be instead of having the free backtracking. Why can't sonic be chased by a black hole. So as to put pressure to the players and add a bit more challenge.
-The timer should be relative to getting a score. Like when you finished faster. Then you get a higher score. So as to make the timer useful in a way.

Despite all of that I commend efforts into making a solid game. However it looks like its obviously copied from your other game which is mission impossible. Try to add some variety so that it wont look like it was copied. But anyways I feel tired and half Asleep but I hope I got my point across your game and I hope you're reading this with an open mind.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber (Probably did a video about this)
Etriuswimbleton

[Memorization3000]

Dear philanderson556

Well nice work on making a solid game. Its simple yeah? but too simple I believe. I'm sorry to burst your bubbles but I believe this wont be able to make it into the portal it seems. This game however would've fit in other sites. I would suggest that you post it around the dump grounds or your website and or just share it with your friends. If you're fishing for feedback though I can help you. So first I'll give you a list of suggestions that may or may not help you to improve this game.

-Add SFX and or Music
-Add an appealing theme of colors and backgrounds. Its just barely insipid.
-Add an interface. Usually games have those. As well as a loading screen too.
-Instead of letters try to add something more difficult to discern like a picture or a phrase or just add a smorgasbord of anything. Just not letters.

Despite all the suggestions I made, Still you need to add a little bit more than just picking out cards. I'm only considering the suggestions based on the game you have here and I hope you read this with an open mind. Kudos.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on first impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton