Animation art and sync is stunning but this leaves me with one question thereof in mind. What does the context entails from this animation loop? Its gratifyingly surreal I'll give you that but it kind of leaves a dry confusing taste for what this really mean. Frankly I don't really favor gratuitous randomness unless it's depicted in chunks for slap stick comedy and or manifesting an aesthetic message.
And also how the loop plays out makes me think that you drew each scenes as you go along with the drawings not with a plot or goal in mind. Nonetheless it was good.
P.S This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions
Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Robot Jones is dead.
This is madness!
I'll break your neck, I'm a maniac
So random yet it just works. Lip Syncing was the most prominent through the entirety of the animation, and I say, it was well done. Sound effects and voices though were a bit flawed, they don't sound right I'm afraid but nonetheless it was still funny. This could also be the debut of a new distinct character on newgrounds and that is, Street Shark! Would be interested to see some more of him. Cheers!
This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions
Wow just wow...Is this how Overwatch is being overlooked these days? Is this like an Overwatch in a Nutshell kind of thing? If it is then I applaud you sir! quite closely depicted on what the madness that entails in Overwatch. Here comes the nitpicky part tho, brace yourselves; Some are a bit too random, Well I'm not oriented much with Overwatch's quirks but it just seems random like the instance where the cowboy suddenly emits a high pitched vuvuzela sound. Hahaha eitherway the animation was pretty cool and the comedy is well depicted especially to those feeling close to home with Overwatch.
So this is a thing now? I'm not really oriented on the whole Captain Tardigrade really but this intrigued me on a whole new level, So surreal and dark yet its quite gratifyingly hilarious albeit I'm guilty about it.
Anyways, would like to see more shorts like these, short but sweet.
I quite enjoyed the whole musical throughout the animation however, In the back of my head, the choice of music along with the TIMING of the voice syncing in with the cadence of the beat of the bass doesn't sound mutually good overall. Albeit, your animation skills are up to par but the execution of the song isn't well thought out I'm afraid. Despite that, frankly it was quite catchy I'll give you that.
I really enjoyed that twist at the end there. As well as how OP superman is if he's dead serious into subduing batman even going so far as to killing him without remorse.
And its true what they say, Batman's smart enough to know he's no match against someone apparently indestructible so he did plan ahead when he dies. Great job. Got me a few laughs at the end there as well.
Thanks for the lengthy review. I'll check out your Youtube channel.
The sounds and voice effect are apparently not clear/lucid enough, furthermore the animation wasn't really interesting to begin with. I'd suggest polishing this more and adding what you've aforementioned in you're author's comments. If something big is indeed coming, then please Submit that when its done rather than this. If your intention was to give a teaser for your upcoming animation, Make it look like an actual teaser. It would sound cynical for me to ask too much from you given that from the look of this animation; I'd surmise your new into the animating business.
so to end it all just look, it would be more conducive if you basically finish fully your animations then have it submitted here. Try to look for inspiration from the submissions who made it to the front page then assimilate and integrate/apply it with your animations.
PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions
THANKS :) i'm just learning the basics and i only really made this to test the whole static mouth thing! but its great to finally get some real constructive criticism from a higher in class animator! as for the sounds....i'm still figuring out it...its annoying as hell!
I don't think you should warrant this as a real submission in the portal. It would perhaps be more intrinsic or naturally belonging to in places like your news post for instance, or if you want an audience why not share this on your social media or website pages and from there, you can receive more friendly or comfortable feedback without the feeling of being repressed by an actual voting system.
Basically just try to finish this and add more context. Also it's erroneous if you classify it as a parody when apparently it's just a lip syncing animation.
Well that escalated quickly, Nice job with the storytelling aspect and your animation style is quite interesting. It's simple and not too scintillating which is ample to enjoy. It felt like it was real for a moment but anywho, voice narration is clear and spot on, the music is mellow and not too distracting, and finally the story was alright. It could have ended on a better note but I guess the ending is fine nonetheless.
Keep it up! And Cheers!
Hey! Thanks for your review EtriusWimbleton! The story was only the truth, nothing more.
I suppose you are a fan of Castle and Madness. I am too, I freaking love Oscar Johansson's work. I'll keep up my work and improve, just you wait and see.
Regards from a fellow struggling youtuber,
- Lusin, the First of His Name, King of the Bronies and the Sick-fucks, Lord of Equestria and Protector of the Realm.
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