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Dear Fantishow

Animation art and sync is stunning but this leaves me with one question thereof in mind. What does the context entails from this animation loop? Its gratifyingly surreal I'll give you that but it kind of leaves a dry confusing taste for what this really mean. Frankly I don't really favor gratuitous randomness unless it's depicted in chunks for slap stick comedy and or manifesting an aesthetic message.

And also how the loop plays out makes me think that you drew each scenes as you go along with the drawings not with a plot or goal in mind. Nonetheless it was good.

P.S This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Fantishow responds:

Robot Jones is dead.

This is madness!

MobileSpider responds:

I'll break your neck, I'm a maniac

dear The-Slang

I really enjoyed that twist at the end there. As well as how OP superman is if he's dead serious into subduing batman even going so far as to killing him without remorse.

And its true what they say, Batman's smart enough to know he's no match against someone apparently indestructible so he did plan ahead when he dies. Great job. Got me a few laughs at the end there as well.

This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

The-Slang responds:

Thanks for the lengthy review. I'll check out your Youtube channel.

dear RetroREAPER

The sounds and voice effect are apparently not clear/lucid enough, furthermore the animation wasn't really interesting to begin with. I'd suggest polishing this more and adding what you've aforementioned in you're author's comments. If something big is indeed coming, then please Submit that when its done rather than this. If your intention was to give a teaser for your upcoming animation, Make it look like an actual teaser. It would sound cynical for me to ask too much from you given that from the look of this animation; I'd surmise your new into the animating business.

so to end it all just look, it would be more conducive if you basically finish fully your animations then have it submitted here. Try to look for inspiration from the submissions who made it to the front page then assimilate and integrate/apply it with your animations.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

RetroREAPER responds:

THANKS :) i'm just learning the basics and i only really made this to test the whole static mouth thing! but its great to finally get some real constructive criticism from a higher in class animator! as for the sounds....i'm still figuring out it...its annoying as hell!

dear TheGreyWolf159

I see you have the ample knack to be able to create a full length madness animation...But please, consider making one instead of submitting this scanty nonsensical scene here. Anyways, Sound FX are synced well, animation needs some polishing, camera panning needs more work since it looks jittery, Also what's with the random homer victory scream at the end?

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Normalium responds:

yeah i know brah

dear ZabuJard

I see you have a knack at creating bizarre kaleidoscopic animations but what is the point of making one if it doesn't have context? Well, clearly I can see a clown here but there is no discernable theme here. I would even classify this as nonsense but despite that, well done with the animation.

This review is solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

ZabuJard responds:

thanks for your kind reviews chum. ill try to add more plots maybe in the future. sometimes i just dont like plots.

dear ChrisLeRoy

Well that was...Alright but frankly its not that funny. I was half expecting this to have a scintillating impact to make up for its short length but it was not met. You can do better, try to make it a little bit longer or even better, try to improve upon this idea but with a more grandiloquent outcome. Something easily memorably impactful that is both hilarious and clever at the same time JUST to make up for the 15 second comedy sketch you're making.

I might be asking to much for you as judging from this animation and gleaning from your descriptions and profile; you might be new to this but still you can do better. Anyways, well done for the animation; I for one don't have the knack and courage to make one so I commend your efforts and cheers! ;)

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

ChrisLeRoy responds:

Thankyou for your honest opinion.. the joke fell short and I appreciate you taking the time to say that. Its actually all good.. you are right this is my most complex animation I have done to date. What I am proud of is that you were happy with my animation, not my content and that is something I will work on, so thank you for sharing... I appreciate... Hopefully you will conquer Youtube...keep at it.

Dear LeiWu7

This is Impressive but this is just it? Sorry but something like this would perhaps fit in with other websites. Unlike here, since arbitrarily most submissions that have gone through judgement have more context. I'm not saying this is bad, its just that it needs more. I'll leave that up to you however.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

LeiWu7 responds:

Hi Etriuswimbleton! It is rather lacking I agree. Okay, I will try something else, thanks for the feedback! :)

dear Atp505

First and foremost I'd like to greet a Happy Birthday to Deron.

So anyways, well done with the animation. You were able to create this is under two weeks? Pretty fast I must say. The animation was smooth, the effects were cool, the sound FX was well synced and the music was okay. However, judging this is short and is just some nonsensical action tribute I would give this only a few stars but nonetheless this was great work. Keep it up! And maybe you'll make something more hefty ;)

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Atp505 responds:

Ok, thanks for reviewing. The next time, i´m gonna try to make a longer movie and with sense.

dear Waskus

Well...It's not bad, but it's not good either. S
ide note: The W box had a black outline before it enlarged, as well as the rest of the animation being a bit stale and placid (little movement/little activity)

But tell me, what is this intro all about, Is it youtube?

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Waskus responds:

I don't really know, I just wanted to try make myself an intro style on my favourite TV show. And it took me like 20 min (nothing serious) and it wasn't purposed for anything, 'til i created a newgrounds acc and was desperate for uploading something. I should also mention this was my second week with animation and I was trying out some new techniques on Flash.

But thanks fot your honest opinion

Regards from a beginner animator :)
-Waskus

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