etriuswimbleton's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feedfancier's Vore Loop Compilation]

dear feedfancier

How...Quaint? Guess I'm not really familiar with the whole mouth fetish nowadays, Well thanks at least giving me an insight to this world of VORE. The whole animation was frankly creepy and unusual. Albeit your style of animation is well done and you seem to be able to adapt to different art styles as well, the context of the animation itself lacks a purpose...Well other than to satisfy avid VORE Enthusiasts.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Fighting Zombies]

dear TheGreyWolf159

I see you have the ample knack to be able to create a full length madness animation...But please, consider making one instead of submitting this scanty nonsensical scene here. Anyways, Sound FX are synced well, animation needs some polishing, camera panning needs more work since it looks jittery, Also what's with the random homer victory scream at the end?

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Normalium responds:

yeah i know brah

[The Smithy]

Dear AustinLabarbera

I would suggest just sharing this elsewhere instead of uploading it here. You should know, this is where submissions like this goes under the judgement of the Newgrounds community so expect people having high expectations with this. But anyways despite that, your "animation" looks interesting but its scanty and insipid and barely entails the fundamentals of an animation; Which I consider are the, context, plot, sound and character. Still, good job and keep it up so that one day, we'll see something really worthwhile.

P.S: This review and all opinions are solely based on First impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[WHAT IF TOM FULP WAS A CLOWN HOLY COW WOW]

dear ZabuJard

I see you have a knack at creating bizarre kaleidoscopic animations but what is the point of making one if it doesn't have context? Well, clearly I can see a clown here but there is no discernable theme here. I would even classify this as nonsense but despite that, well done with the animation.

This review is solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

ZabuJard responds:

thanks for your kind reviews chum. ill try to add more plots maybe in the future. sometimes i just dont like plots.

[15 Seconds of Comedy - Fart Joke]

dear ChrisLeRoy

Well that was...Alright but frankly its not that funny. I was half expecting this to have a scintillating impact to make up for its short length but it was not met. You can do better, try to make it a little bit longer or even better, try to improve upon this idea but with a more grandiloquent outcome. Something easily memorably impactful that is both hilarious and clever at the same time JUST to make up for the 15 second comedy sketch you're making.

I might be asking to much for you as judging from this animation and gleaning from your descriptions and profile; you might be new to this but still you can do better. Anyways, well done for the animation; I for one don't have the knack and courage to make one so I commend your efforts and cheers! ;)

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

ChrisLeRoy responds:

Thankyou for your honest opinion.. the joke fell short and I appreciate you taking the time to say that. Its actually all good.. you are right this is my most complex animation I have done to date. What I am proud of is that you were happy with my animation, not my content and that is something I will work on, so thank you for sharing... I appreciate... Hopefully you will conquer Youtube...keep at it.

[Finger Fire]

Dear LeiWu7

This is Impressive but this is just it? Sorry but something like this would perhaps fit in with other websites. Unlike here, since arbitrarily most submissions that have gone through judgement have more context. I'm not saying this is bad, its just that it needs more. I'll leave that up to you however.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

LeiWu7 responds:

Hi Etriuswimbleton! It is rather lacking I agree. Okay, I will try something else, thanks for the feedback! :)

[8-Bit Never Dies]

dear RockOnAnimations

Well done with the sprite animations but I don't get the context of this really. At first I was expecting; judging from the title, about the protagonist going around meeting 8-bit characters and play around with them. I was expecting this would give me that vibe similar to the animation of "the legend of Miyamoto" Only with 8-bit characters.

Back to the animation itself. The sfx were well synced, good job. But there was no music all throughout, excluding the boss battle but that perhaps felt too late. And for the rest of the animation...It was nonsensical to be frank and still I don't get the context or point of this.

I would suggest adding some kind of story into it. But I would leave that up to you to decide.
Also this was way too short and it ended abruptly so there's that.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Incident: 015D]

dear Atp505

First and foremost I'd like to greet a Happy Birthday to Deron.

So anyways, well done with the animation. You were able to create this is under two weeks? Pretty fast I must say. The animation was smooth, the effects were cool, the sound FX was well synced and the music was okay. However, judging this is short and is just some nonsensical action tribute I would give this only a few stars but nonetheless this was great work. Keep it up! And maybe you'll make something more hefty ;)

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Atp505 responds:

Ok, thanks for reviewing. The next time, i´m gonna try to make a longer movie and with sense.

[Dank Cave]

dear AlienLock

Animation was short but it was good and smooth. Things missing here are well, sound FX and the full thing. Also I got to point out, why did you extend the animation by lengthening the Outro screen? That was completely unnecessary.

But despite that, I can see potential in this. Keep it up, and you may as well make great stick animation someday.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Donnut Run!]

dear Ron264

I'm waiting...Waiting...And waiting...And still nothing happens.
You deceived me with that promise of getting that donut! But anyways all I'm seeing here is a loop of a stick figure chasing a donut and never catches or changes in any way.

Not much context and comedic here. Its just nonsensical at best. Also lack of sound and music makes it more insipid. I would suggest making this longer.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on First Impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber