etriuswimbleton's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[IMAGINATION]

dear MRG4887

That was a great job with the animation and the music fitting altogether.
A few problems bug me is that it ended quite abruptly. But anyways animation is great nice work with the hand drawn frame by frame style, can leave a good message but I don't have the smarts to think of it yet. Cheers!

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

MRG4887 responds:

Thank you for your comment! the ending thing is the result of me struggling with sound edition programs (i dont know nothing about sound edition so when i tried to edit the song to end... well... its a long story)
I always use frame by frame because i suck with motion tween.
Thanks again!

[Madness: Ramification PREVIEW]

Dear Sherklov

Animation could use some work, it wasn't smooth but you can work your way around that if you can. Anyways this was interesting but its not really much of a preview, you could've made it into an interesting trailer (even though that would be tedious, but it would get your audienced hyped for it)
A trailer where you introduce the character, then his role and mission, then the antagonist and stuff pretty much like the intro of Madness combat 5. Then you'll preview shots of the action scenes, scene by scene, in random but coherently and associated with a kick ass soundtrack to beat.

But I have to indicate some sfx are missing, as well as music. Dunno why you removed the looped music if this is apparently a preview. Good luck with the animation and kudos for making one.

Regards from a struggling youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Stick Fight]

Great animations. Good work. But what's missing is SFX. As well as an introduction to who and what are they? Basically it just needs an introduction (a foundation for a story too perhaps) then SFX. then you're golden. Can't wait to see the finished product.

PapoFuradoPA responds:

I'm working in a new project and in this one i will take good care of SFX! Thank you for the review :)

[Combo Request hosted by Kass]

Short but sweet.
Also the idea has lots of promise! This could go into a compilation, Of preset combos which the stick have to perform in epic feats!

[stupor]

The music though is a bit way off, unfitting (I apologize if you created it yourself).
But the humor is alright.
Needs some sfx too though.

It could start off gloomy, melancholic sad. The guy dies from imbibing too much alcohol.
And slowly a ghost erupted out of him. Then the ghost wanders around and is met by death which turns out to be a duck...? (the duck could say some kind of one liner that could send chills or make it funny)

[FISH FISH]

Ummm you could've just blogged about it or send this to the dumping grounds, than instead of posting it here as an ACTUAL WORK to be reviewed critically by the community?

Oddlem responds:

yes

[The Hangover]

This is...Crazy good. Though Nothing really interesting. The sounds should be on the opposite side instead when he vomits but that's just minor detail. Its short but doesn't really entail a good message.

[Bang]

Well that was...Anticlimactic.

[Freeze (Short)]

Animations are smooth. But lots of missing features here and there.
I know its a short but you could've just shared it on the dumping grounds or blog about it.
Eitherway it has potential for just random nonsensical madness animations!

Aviator123 responds:

yeah thanks for the rating though

[Disney Princesses Reimagined INC]

Wow the way you guys talk....O.o