etriuswimbleton's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stickman Obstacle Course]

dear BusinessCatStudio

Okay first things first. Well done on the animation. Humor is well..okay I guess, But I'm not really a comedy guy so anyways the camera seems to be a bit lagging at times and a bit jittery. Same goes for the animations of the sticks. The sticks act a bit stiff and basically its not really smooth. Sorry. But anyways animation is good. Has an unexpected end. There are some parts that bother me though like the part where the red stick fell off so far from the ledge like he's being pulled in by gravity, furthermore when the purple's flying gadget disintegrated into ashes making him fall but only a few feet below which I believe sticks can survive the fall. but anyways sorry for being nitpicky but I hope I got my point across though you. This review is a mess of random ideas but I hope you get it.

PS: This review and all opinions are solely based on first impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Madman on that Balloon]

dear DevronBliss

Okay ummm you wouldn't mislead us if your intention was to troll us or not. The description I meant is misleading to the real content shown from your submission. And speaking of your submission its...Well I have a tolerance for humor but the humor here, considering that you put it into the category as original comedy. The humor here is bland. I apologize though for the low score but there was nothing really interesting and funny with this sorry. All I see here is basically just a ball bouncing from side to side as the TV broadcasts random stuff. I was at least expecting well...Whatever you put into the description to be the one I'll watch. frankly I'd watch whatever you told us in that description rather than this as the hot air balloon seems to be more interesting than this.

PS:This review and all opinions are based solely on first impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

DevronBliss responds:

Dear etriuswimbleton

I'm new to this, I didn't mean for this to happen, but I tried to fix it! I'm Sorry this happened, It's my own human error. I never meant anything misleading or ever meant to troll at all. Thanks for letting me know. I'll try to get the real one uploaded right away!

-Devron

UPDATE: It's fixed now, I'm terribly sorry for this as I take full responsibility for this!

[Shut up and dance with me!]

Dear Ex-Poser

Well That was...quite confusing. But anyways animation is pretty smooth. The way you depict their facial animations is astounding. Cartoonish but enthralling. At first I was expecting something quirky with a little bit of fluff...Maybe its because of the cover photo but It had me expecting about well..A music video where two strangers just setting aside their differences and dance. Didn't quite expect this to turn out really creepy. Humor was well Honestly I gotta say its average at best. But nonetheless surprising, well done.

PS:This review and all opinions are solely based on first impressions

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Ex-Poser responds:

Thanks for the positives and negatives laid out in a neat, clean, lengthy review etriuswimbleton. I think the theme I was aiming for the most was a total flip in the mood. Something totally unexpected and random while at the same time relating to the overall story.

I think you'll find that a lot with most of my creations mainly because that's just my taste in humour. Stuff like (of course) Ren and Stimpy and Rick and Morty, where crazy, creepy comedy bleeds through the overall "innocence" of the cartoon is the main influence and inspiration for most of my work.

But it's totally cool that you weren't totally pleased with the result on the first impression compared to your expectation. My stuff is meant to warp and purely flip what you expect to happen. Thanks for the review man, I love lengthy ones.

[Anioco's Undertale]

Dear Anioco

That was very unexpectedly funny! I like how the animation is pretty smooth. I'm not very oriented with undertale though so I gotta ask, does flowey outright attack you like that? Anyways I like the parts where the petals didn't even make Chara flinch, as well as the ending. Ahhh mexicans and lawnmowers and Dora. XD

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Anioco responds:

Thanks! I tried to make the video as attached to the game.

[DISTURBING YOUTUBE THUMBNAILS]

Dear Doogtoons

The joke in the end got me in fumbles haha! And I like how his co worker is a bit oriented with youtube thumbnails. I was expecting his coworker to not even know what youtube is. Well done on surprising me. On other news I think I heard that outro song before...Familiar.

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[No peaking... Trailer]

Dear Color-it-in

You should probably get a better microphone or have your microphone covered with a foam. It would prevent the booming sounds where you make an S or a B. Also alternatively is the audio a bit amplified or are you too close to the microphone? Its kinda hard to hear it clearly and also did I see this sans animation before? It looks familiar. Anyways sorry for being too nitpicky but I have to say what does this trailer entail? It was just sans saying something for what I can comprehend due to the audio is frisk? And I surmise it would be another undertale Sans battle?

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Color-it-in responds:

Well it was all donee on an iPhone+iPad so when I get an actual computer I'll have more to it. But I can't afford it so this was all we got

[Secret Satan]

Dear Larrynachos and ChazDude

I gotta say well done on the animation style and sound syncing. The humor was also spot on.
I wasnt even bothered by the simplistic drawings and effects. It was unexpected and worthwhile to watch haha! Especially its in the holiday theme. I also liked the part where ghost Santa's voice started muttering instead of well chanting his powers XD. It was short but sweet. Also well done on animating this in well one day. That takes skill and well the strength to fight laziness to overcome that. But anyways Im just rambling incoherent nonsense here...Basically its good.

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

larrynachos responds:

Hey, thanks for the review man!

[Madness Christmasenation]

Dear esetox

Animation is well done. Syncing of music and sounds are well done too.
I was wondering what bothers me is that if its called christmasenation but where's the christmas theme in it? Well i guess its the money bonus and the end scene where the protagonists wears a christmas hat but...I would suggest adding an ending special message/greeting to your viewers at the end too. Like Happy Holidays and etc...

And why did the grenade bounce off instead of exploding instantly? Is it normal or does the character have supernatural powers where he lunges inhumanely far? Maybe he has cat powers?
Anyways sorry for nitpicking but Thats how i review. Dammit IM SLEEPY!

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

Skrawk responds:

Yeah.. I forgotten to christmas theme , why grenade bounced off? bcause i want do it like in Team Fortress 2. Anyways thank's for review ..If I do make another animation I will look at the details.

[IT'S A BIRD-HEAD!]

Dear CaptainFluff

I gotta commend you though for the animation. It looks smooth and well done. Especially the lip syncing. Problem is that...Its too short. Furthermore its lacking in well...humor. It didn't leave me much of an impact. But anyways good job with the drawing and animation and all.

Regards from a Struggling youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

[Madness: DD (short)]

Dear DoMoDESIGN

Okay first things first. I was particularly annoyed by the music. It was only making sounds through my left ear. Secondly I saw some problems with the masking. Like how the guy with the kabuki mask (is it?) holds the gun the wrong way. Third some scenes were a bit confusing, what did Ronald mcdonald do? I guess that scene didn't really matter but why put it there? Is it a compilation of shorts? Fourth, there was no introduction...I mean like an intro to who, what, and how the character is and was. Since we're taken into the fight without any prior knowledge of what's really going on.

But anyways all in all animation is okay, you can improve upon that with time. Try to make animations a bit smooth though, work with the masking of corpses, the heads are trembling for some reason instead of it moving in unison with the body/

Regards from a Struggling Youtuber
Etriuswimbleton

DoMoDESIGN responds:

Hello, rly thank you for you comment. I know I see to many problems but this is my first animation and I worked with flash first time. I must learn more about madness and practise. Im glad to you for your comment, have a nice day man :)